5th Grade Garcia Assignment 11/14

Instructions:

1.Go to yesterday’s assignment page and read some of the stories.

2. Comment on THREE of the stories.

Classes of mine in the past have commented on stories by:

1. Saying “I like your story” and tell one reason why

2. Saying “Your story made me feel good” and tell one reason why.

3. Saying “I liked your story because it was unusual” and tell one reason why

4. Saying “Your story was not really well written, but it came out sounding good” and tell one reason why

5. Saying “Your story made me laugh” and tell one reason why.

Put your response to three stories in the comment box

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25 Responses to “5th Grade Garcia Assignment 11/14”

  1. i liked alains story because the cat was behind the tree.

  2. i liked alivns because the cat was in the closet all the time.

  3. I liked Diamond’s story because it was relaxing.

  4. i liked sids because the girl posted up sighs. it was cool.

  5. Alaina’s story made me laugh because it was about time that she found the kitten.

  6. i liked alains story because the cat was behind the tree.

  7. Your story made me feel good Alvin. I liked it because she got her cat in the end.
    Your story was not well written Carlos. In the end you put “here=kitty”.
    Your story made me feel good Sidhartha. I liked it because the ending is kind of funny to me.

  8. Aliyah Tijaro Says:

    I like your story.The reason way I like it is beacouse it reamins me about my grandmas cat and found it in her litterbox.

  9. I liked Selena S story because it was about dancing.

  10. I liked Sidhartha’s story because he shows how Ana feel and what she said.

  11. I liked Alaina’s story because it was about a cat chasing a dog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  12. Selena Torres Says:

    I liked Ariana’s story because it was realistic by her saying that she was crying and looking all over the place. I kind of did not understand what Fernanda was saying because she made many spelling errors. Like she said the cat drink milk when she got the kitten.When it was suppose to be the cat drank milk when the she got the cat. I liked Ana’s story because she really discribed her story by saying that she cried really loud that the whole niegborhood could hear her. And she said that she felt so sad that she had to go very far away.

  13. I liked alvins story becuse it had more details. I liked my story becuse I rote about her feelings.i liked daimons story.

  14. i like alivns that the cat was in the coset.

  15. I liked samantha’s story because she made it funny and intresting.

  16. I liked Samantha’s story because it was about a bird swimming with a dog.

  17. I like Arianna’s story because it was sad and fun at the same time.

  18. i LIkE iT bECaUsE iT WaZ kOoL=) i liked the way how ana wrote detels

  19. I really liked Selena s. because it made me feel good. It was awesome.
    !COOL!
    I really liked Diamond’s story because it was kind of funny. I like when people do stories and their funny.
    !COOL!
    I really liked Arianna’s because she had plenty of detail.
    !COOL!

  20. I liked mark’s story because he wrote about what she did to get her cat back.

  21. i like ariana story because it was realistic.

  22. I the story of Jose when he said that the cat come back.I also like Alaina’s when she said that the little girl heard her cat meaw meaw.

  23. i @lso liked how @ri@nn@ whote th@t the little girl got her kitten from her gr@m@. i @slo liked jose’s becu@se i like how did he whote what h@ppend to the girl!!!!!!!!!!!!

  24. I liked the part when the cat came back because it has strong words.

  25. i like that story because she look for her kitten at the neighbors house.
    That story made me feel happy because she is looking for her kitten.
    your story felt unusual because i didn’t really understand.
    your story was very good but i have to tell you it was a little boring .
    your story made my laugh because it was so funny.

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