5th Grade Garcia Assignment 11/7

image_editToday’s Assignment

Edit the following passage for spelling and grammar the best you can.  Rewrite the passage on paper.

Writing should come from your voyce, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what u want to rite is one thing, Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. that’s why editing is so impotant. It taykes practuce to make riting sumthing that makes sense and is to tha point. It is eesy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum thing, when u are actually saying not much.

18 Responses to “5th Grade Garcia Assignment 11/7”

  1. writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing. Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another way thats why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something , when you are actually saying not much.

  2. Selena Torres Says:

    Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a piece of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sence and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actually saying not much.

  3. selena s. Says:

    Writing should come from your voice,so it is really a peace of your heart.Knowing what you want write is one thing getting to the point is another.It takes practice to make writing something that makes since and is to that point.it is easy to repeat yourself and something,when you are actually not saying much.

  4. sidhartha Says:

    Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a piece from your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing. Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actully saying something.

  5. writing should come from voice,so it is really a peace of your heart.Knowing what you want to write is one thing. Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That is why editing is important. It takes pratice is so to write something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy yo reapeat yourself and sound like you are saying something when you are actully saying not much.

  6. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a piece of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are saying nothing that much.

  7. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actually saying not much.

  8. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something when you are actually saying not much.

  9. writing should come from your voyce, so it is really a peace of your heart. knowing what u want to rite is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all toghether is another.thats why editing is so important. it takes practuce to make riting something that makes sense and is to the point. it is easy to reapt your self and sound like you are saying some thing , when you are actuallyn saying not much.

  10. WRITING SHOULD COME FROM YOUR VOICE ,SO IT IS REALLY A PEACE OF YOUR heart .KNOWING WHAT YOU WANT TO WRITE IS ONE THING, GETTING TO THE point and keeping it all together is another.That;s why editing is so IMPORTANT.It takes Practure TO MAKE writing something that makes sense and Is To ta point. It is easy to rapeat to your self and soundlike you are saying something,when you are actually saying not much.

  11. writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart.
    Knowing what u want to rite is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another . It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum thing, when you are actually saying to much.

  12. writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to rite is one thing. Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. it takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. it is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something , when you are actually saying not much.

  13. writing should from your voice so it is really a peace of your heart.knowing what u want to rice is one thing, Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another.That;s why editing is so important . It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum thing, when u are actually saying not much.

  14. Writing should come from your voice,so it is really a peace of your hart. Knowing what you want to rite is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together. That’s why editing is so impotent.It takes practice to make writing something that you makes sense and is to that point .It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying not much.

  15. Writing should come form your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. knowing what you want to rite is one thing ,getting to the point and keeping it all together is so important. It takes practice to make riting something that make sentence and is to that point. It is easy to repeat your self and sound like you are saying some thing ,when you are actually saying not much.

  16. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to rite is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. it takes practice to make writing some thing that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat your self and sound like you are saying some thing, when you are actually saying not much.

  17. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart . Knowing what you want to write is one thing , getting to the point and keeping it all together is another . That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to writing something that

  18. writing should come from your voice so it really a place of your heart knowing what u want to rite is one thing , getting to the point and keeping it all together is another that’s why editing is so important it takes practuce to make riting sumthing that makes sens and is to that point it is eesy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum ting when u are actually saying not much.

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