5th Grade Mr. Kanani Assignment 11/10

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Today’s Assignment

Edit the following passage for spelling and grammar the best you can. Write your answer as a “comment”, rewrite the passage in your comment space.

Writing should come from your voyce, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what u want to rite is one thing, Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. that’s why editing is so impotant. It taykes practuce to make riting sumthing that makes sense and is to tha point. It is eesy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum thing, when u are actually saying not much.

20 Responses to “5th Grade Mr. Kanani Assignment 11/10”

  1. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart.Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another.That’s why editing is so important.It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point.It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actually saying not much.

  2. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a piece from your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing. Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actually saying not much.

  3. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a piece of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important.It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point.It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actually saying not much.

  4. writing should come from your voice so its really a peace of your heart. knowing what you want to write is one thing,is getting to the point and keeping it all together is another.thats why editing is so important.it is easy to repeat yourself and sound like actually saying not much

  5. writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing. Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to that point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying some thing. When you are actually saying not much.

  6. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing, Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to that point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actually saying not mush.

  7. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what u want to rite is one thing, Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. that’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum thing, when u are actually saying not much.

  8. writing should come from your voice,so it is really a piece of your heart.Knowing what you want to write is one thing,getting to the point and keeping it all together is another thats why editing is so important.It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to a point.It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something,when you actually saying not much.

  9. Writing should come from your voice,so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what u want to write is one thing,getting to the point and keeping it all together. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to ta point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum thing, when you are actually saying not much.

  10. Writing should come from your voice,so it is really a peace of your hart.Knowing what you want to write is one thing.Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another.That’s why Editing is so important. It takes practice is to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point.It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something ,when you are not saying much.

  11. Writing should come from your voice , so it really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing , getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to that point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something , when you are actually saying not much.

  12. Writing should come from your voice,so it is a piece of your heart. knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to that point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something, when you are actually saying not much.

  13. Writing should come from your voice so it is rely a peace of your heart. knowing what you want to rite is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another .That’s why editing is so important . It takes practice to makes sense and is to the point .l It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying some thing, when you are actually saying not much .

  14. Writing should come from your voice,so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why ending is so important. It takes practice to make sense and is to the point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you and saying sum thing, when you are actually saying not much.

  15. Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart .Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is

  16. Writing should come from your voice,so it is really a peace of your hear. Knowing what you want to write is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important. It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to that point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something , when you are actually saying not much.

  17. Amador Alvarez Says:

    Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your hurt. Knowing what you want to write is one thing ,getting to the point and keeping it is another. That’s why editing is important. It takes practice to make sense and is to that point. It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying sum thing, When you are actually saying not much.

  18. Writing should come from your voice so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to write is one thing ,Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another . It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to the point . It is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something ,when you are actually saying not much

  19. Writing should come from your voice,so it is really a peace of your heart. Knowing what you want to rite is one thing, Getting to the point and keeping it all together is another. That’s why editing is so important.It takes practice to make writing something that makes sense and is to that point. It is

  20. Rocio Castaneda Says:

    Writing should come from your voice, so it is really a peace of your heart.Knowing what you want to rite is one thing, getting to the point and keeping it all together is another.That’s why editing is important.It takes practice to make righting something that makes sense and is to tho point.Is easy to repeat yourself and sound like you are saying something when you are actually saying not much.

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